Becky Collier

I can usually live just fine with some grammar mistakes - if a story is otherwise compelling. With this book, I unfortunately only made it through the first couple of pages before I threw up my hands and gave up. The numerous run-on sentences with their missing commas or full stops were simply too exhausting to read. Some examples: "Hi Sarah boy am I glad to see you I've had a weird morning, how are you?" "Great Sarah was coming round today I only see her a few times a month when her mom comes over to see mine." "I felt Sarah ...