Becky Collier Layla Memoirs Of A Shewolf


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    Layla Memoirs Of A Shewolf


    06. June 2013 um 20:00

    I can usually live just fine with some grammar mistakes - if a story is otherwise compelling. With this book, I unfortunately only made it through the first couple of pages before I threw up my hands and gave up. The numerous run-on sentences with their missing commas or full stops were simply too exhausting to read. Some examples: "Hi Sarah boy am I glad to see you I've had a weird morning, how are you?" "Great Sarah was coming round today I only see her a few times a month when her mom comes over to see mine." "I felt Sarah behind me my mind was telling me to grab her and run but now I had frozen, my toes curling trying to grip the forest floor." The story might or might not be good, plot-wise, but it really needs the attention of an editor or at least a good beta reader.

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